For a Scorpion~
I thought I would move on
Coz siblings tend to be bygone
It was hard when I tried
To hide tears when I lied
But i realize I should move on
Coz by now it’s a case forlorn
Dear! I tried in vain to find
U in he or he in U and became blind
Each affection has a flavour
Mother or brother – nothings in my favour
I promise I shall move on
Time mends hearts that are torn..
This is a a tribute to my friend on his birthday..which was yesterday! It probably doesnt make sense to neone else! probably not even him. So just consider this as a loving gesture for a lost friend!
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Am a Verbivore. I devour words. A true libran (without a dimple) i still search for that creativity the venus blessed are rumoured to have in loads. Yeah i search it here in the world of words.
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Now thats a wonderful poem, I mean it.
and yeah, move on ! Life runs too fast to remain upset for people who doesnt deserve it. ( I donno if it would make sense to you, but this is what I learned in the last few years ).
Take care 😀
Even if personal, a poem can be related to anyone. And this is the case here. I wish you wrote more poetry, because it sounds marvellous.
Thank you dear, and keep on… :>)
Mae
nice gesture 🙂 it awesome
@ Vimal – as always u r thr 🙂 thanx but u knw for a dreamy person like me dear ones remain dear no matter what they deserve. but yeah i promise..i’ll move on 😉
@Mae – your friendship has aquainted me to another world of words. I read Prevert – hes sounds great. the other one is in french. alas i havent learnt the language yet 😉
@Praddy thanx a lot for dropping by 🙂 glad that you liked it
Poignant. Period.
I quite understand. Parting ways is never easy. And “moving on” is easier said than done. Isn’t it? I guess time is indeed the so-called solution…
“Time- the ultimate revealer.
Time- the ultimate healer.
Time- with it comes hope and a new day,
Time- will tell how many stay true to what they say.
Time- will tell how many souls will be pained,
Time- something precious, that can never be regained.
Time- you can bide, but never buy;
But, there is a time to be born…
And a time to die.”
I wrote one on parting ways… A story. Do read when you have time.
http://kartzonline.blogspot.com/2008/05/magma-forge-ramifications-of-rage.html
Peace, and have a great weekend.
Yes, it might be not easy to translate Jacques Prévert. Some of his poems might, but others are so subtle, that we inevitably miss many understandings. Or the shape is truncated for the meaning.
I guess you could find good translations, or ask me, I could make it for you; as to some of them.
Sometimes, we can be stunned by discoveries in doing…
I like his poetry, I couldn’t tell how. He’s a genious, I re-dicover.
Thanks also for your friendship and encouragements.
Mae
Thanks for reminding me of something very nice that happened to me a long time ago. It wasn’t a birthday poem I received, but it was a poem and written by a friend of one of my teenage daughters. My daughter’s friend put into poetry how much she liked me for understanding young people her age. I’ve cherished those words ever since.
Oh! how sweet – your comment made me smile. I too loved it when my friends parents were affectionate with me! I would have written poetry in gold for one ‘aunt’-in law. but somehow am shy to put it across ..even ths poem would never reach my friends ears!
hey came to ur blog from your comment on Smita’s blog…and look what i found…too good poem….and it does make lot of sense…i mean, even though its personal it applies to everyone 🙂
And I feel, we should not live too much in past since whether or not we move, time moves…and its always good to move hand in hand with time…. 🙂
Adding you to my google reader now :D…would be regular 😀
@sahaja – tht was the kindest comment i got..yeah have to move on ;P but somehow mind wants to cling back 🙂
thanks for dropping by..and thanx a ton for the kind words.